Dreamers- Oblivion

Ok so this is a book about what happened with the Dreamers and Oblivion, a creature... well i'm not sure what she is. I'll ask... anyway, here's the beggining. I'm also doing a commmercial for it(the Dreamers thing- i'm hoping I get animation software for my birthday) that I will post on youtube and later on here. I promise I'll make it the best I can!!!!! It will be to the song Frontline by Pillar. I think it fits an action movie such as this will be- made by me, hopefully, and posted on youtube as well...

Prologue- Hopeless

I woke up to see fire... I sat up in my bed and cried out: "Daddy!" I screamed. He burst through my door, and grabbed another little girl, in the crib that was across from my bed. Then he picked me up and carried me through the door, fire raging around us. Once we were outside, I could sense that he was very sad. I was too scared to ask where we were going or why he was sad. Tears streamed down my face as we ran into the night.